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Question by f!v3-0h: essay help?
its just the intro anything a should improve or work on? http://www.talktofrank.com/home_htm…

Frank leaflet

Introduction

This essay is about the frank leaflet. iwill analyse the frank leaflet i will also review and comment on it. Frank is a helpline for those who are struggling to stop there drug addiction, though it is also for those that are drug addicts. it also helps people with advice on things like sex and alcohol problems. Frank is aimed at almost anyon that is suffering from drug addiction but is mostly aimed at teenagers as they are the primary consumers of drugs. I will now analyse the leaflet giving my opinions and views on the leaflet

P.S could someone please just copy and paste that into MS word on your computer please..i dont have word on mine please i would really apreciate it you can just email it to me..
just click on my profile its there TY

Sammy

Best answer:

Answer by jado427
Ok…first off, you never want to start any piece of writing by saying “This is about…” or “I am going to tell you about…” that’s just tacky and seldom gets you an amazing grade.

Try something like this:

Frank is a helpline for individuals struggling with drug addictions and for those willing to work through through the pain of giving it up. In addition to these services, it also provides individuals advice on topics like sex and alcohol addictions. The primary focus group at Frank is teenagers, the primary consumers of drugs, but it is willing to help anyone.

And then you continue. Like I said, you NEVER want to state what you are going to do! Good luck!

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Addiction Help in South Africa – CRESCENT OF HOPE: THE MAGALIESBURG HEALTH CENTRE – DRUGS Telephone 014 577 2171 083 653 8788 Portion 21 Rietpoort 395JQ [email protected] www.crescentofhope.co.za AL KHALEEL is a community-based organization that meets once a week every Wednesday from 8pm to 10pm at 65 Foyle Street, Crosby to offer free counseling to recovering drug addicts For further information please contact:- Ayesha (082 630 5880) NISHTARA ALCOHOL & DRUG CENTRE — LENASIA Tel: (011) 854-5988 Alt: (011) 834-3228 Fax: (011) 854-5989 ADDICTION ACTION CAMPAIGN COMPUTER GAMES/INTERNET ADDICTION, OVEREATING, OVERWORKING etc. Phone: 079-066-3382 E-mail: [email protected] www.aacorg.co.za SOUTH AFRICAN DEPRESSION AND ANXIETY GROUP To contact a counsellor between 8am-8pm Monday to Sunday, call: (011) 262-6396 www.sadag.co.za SUICIDE HELPLINE 0800 567 567 MENTAL HEALTH LINE(011) 262 6396 POLICE LINE0800 205 026 ISLAMIC HELPLINE – 0118521930 HINDU CARELINE – 0845631022 KZN ISLAMIC CRISIS CENTRE 501 Escoval House at 437 Smith Street, Durban. Phone on 0861 786 400 NATIONAL LIFELINE CRISIS NUMBER 0861 322 322

 

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